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Post by Cute on Aug 11, 2010 15:15:05 GMT -7
"Will you marry me?" Dead whispered quietly.
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Post by Apple Granny Smith on Aug 11, 2010 15:18:28 GMT -7
She smiled, her eyes sparkling lightly. "Oh Dead," she whispered, and she leapt to give him a tight hug. She could tell in her heart that this wasn't something he'd say on a whim, and that he really meant it. "Yes, of course I will," she whispered, happy tears starting to lightly fall down her cheeks.
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Post by Cute on Aug 11, 2010 15:19:37 GMT -7
Dead pulled out a beautiful diamond ring from his pocket and slid it through her ring finger. "I love you. You're the best thing that happened to me."
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Post by Apple Granny Smith on Aug 11, 2010 15:23:49 GMT -7
"I love you too , Dead," she said, smiling at the ring on her fourth finger. "Thank you," she said, her light Hazel eyes meeting his indigo.
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Post by Apple Granny Smith on Aug 11, 2010 19:11:33 GMT -7
Bic :: a very tired, relaxed, and Drained Princess Apple Annabell Abigail Arkyna Called to her beloved.. "Orion , Come in," she said, really slowly, and softly her voice a new gentler, calmer, more soothing one.. She was sitting up , smiling down at the precious Children in her arms.
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Post by C H E Y E N N E on Aug 11, 2010 19:20:52 GMT -7
ooc;; Careful with the names, Apple ):
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Post by Apple Granny Smith on Aug 11, 2010 19:22:58 GMT -7
what are you talking about, Yami?
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Post by C H E Y E N N E on Aug 11, 2010 19:26:28 GMT -7
ooc;; "Princess Apple Annabell Abigail Arkyna" is a bit long. It's one of the qualities of a Mary-Sue.
But I love alliterations, and that is certainly an alliteration, so ; D
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Post by Apple Granny Smith on Aug 11, 2010 19:26:32 GMT -7
OH! Okey dokey!
But wouldn't she be a mary Sue if she is based off of me and I wanted it to be like that?
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Post by C H E Y E N N E on Aug 11, 2010 19:43:47 GMT -7
ooc;; Yes.
Mary-Sues are not good things, though ): That's why Author Avatars are frowned upon in the FF community.
And the writing community in general.
But I don't want to be a complete Writing Nazi, so I'll say no more xP Strangely enough, I like certain Mary-Sues--it's just the poor-me-poor-me-my-life-sucks-emo Sues that I hate.
Luckily, yours is not one of those.
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Post by Apple Granny Smith on Aug 11, 2010 19:49:58 GMT -7
Ahhhh! Gotcha ! *huggles* I. Love chuu.
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Post by C H E Y E N N E on Aug 11, 2010 19:52:43 GMT -7
ooc;; *huggles back* ILY2 =D
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Post by Apple Granny Smith on Aug 11, 2010 19:57:37 GMT -7
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Post by C H E Y E N N E on Aug 11, 2010 19:58:05 GMT -7
ooc;; *rolls* Yami's bored ):
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Post by Apple Granny Smith on Aug 11, 2010 19:59:33 GMT -7
Apple is bored too...... apples boredom + Yamz boredom = new plot??
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