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Rogue of Night Global Moderator Uchiha Sasuke ? Haruno Sakura Posts: 6,807	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 22:36:55 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rogue of Night on Jan 17, 2011 22:36:55 GMT -7 Hey Yami~
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C H E Y E N N E Administrator E L E M E N T A R Y Posts: 4,875	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 22:39:48 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by C H E Y E N N E on Jan 17, 2011 22:39:48 GMT -7 ^^ Fchaaaa. This scene DOESN'T. FIT. Stupid GLL. Why are you being so difficult?

Rogue of Night Global Moderator Uchiha Sasuke ? Haruno Sakura Posts: 6,807	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 22:41:19 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rogue of Night on Jan 17, 2011 22:41:19 GMT -7 xD Sorry, I wouldn't know why it is
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C H E Y E N N E Administrator E L E M E N T A R Y Posts: 4,875	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 22:43:20 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by C H E Y E N N E on Jan 17, 2011 22:43:20 GMT -7 Eh, no, probably. Suffice to say I am trying very, very hard to tackle the America/England pairing, and there's a vital scene that just doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the story.

Rogue of Night Global Moderator Uchiha Sasuke ? Haruno Sakura Posts: 6,807	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 22:45:59 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rogue of Night on Jan 17, 2011 22:45:59 GMT -7 That sucks :/
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Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 22:53:12 GMT -7

Post by C H E Y E N N E on Jan 17, 2011 22:53:12 GMT -7

I do like how the confrontation scene came out, though...
(Don't worry - no slash. It's still brotherly at this point, y'know?)

The horror he sees in England’s eyes makes him feel giddy, but some part of him warns him – no, screams at him – that he’s taking this too far. It screams at him to stop, not to do this – to say these things. It breaks the barriers America closed around it, rushing through his mind, filling his head with images, memories, sounds, and touches. England making him the toy soldiers, England telling him stories at night, England comforting him when he falls, or when he has a nightmare – England being there, caring for him, raising him. But another part of America’s mind snarls at him to ignore the feelings – England betrayed him, he lied to him; he imposed the tax on America to keep him in line, because without America, England loses a valuable asset. It tells him that, to England, America is just another colony – just another source of income. England doesn’t love him; he just wants to use him. That’s all he’s ever wanted, and that’s all he ever will want.
He loves you, America! The first part of his mind screeches again, as if it senses its loss of control, but America ignores it, shutting it out and condemning it.
“I’m not your little brother anymore, England,” America whispers.

Rogue of Night Global Moderator Uchiha Sasuke ? Haruno Sakura Posts: 6,807	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 22:55:48 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rogue of Night on Jan 17, 2011 22:55:48 GMT -7 Dude that's sweet. I was a little thrown off cause I'm not used to the present tense part of it, but...yeah...you never cease to amaze with your writing skills.
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C H E Y E N N E Administrator E L E M E N T A R Y Posts: 4,875	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 22:59:48 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by C H E Y E N N E on Jan 17, 2011 22:59:48 GMT -7 Hugs Emily

Rogue of Night Global Moderator Uchiha Sasuke ? Haruno Sakura Posts: 6,807	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 23:02:00 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rogue of Night on Jan 17, 2011 23:02:00 GMT -7 hugs back Honestly, you have nothing to worry about in these exams or anything. You will floor them all!
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Rogue of Night Global Moderator Uchiha Sasuke ? Haruno Sakura Posts: 6,807	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 17, 2011 23:45:08 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rogue of Night on Jan 17, 2011 23:45:08 GMT -7 I have to go Yami D: I'll talk to you tomorrow maybe? If I don't catch you before your exams, good luck, and I will be sending you good vibes Night love~ megaglomphugthing
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C H E Y E N N E Administrator E L E M E N T A R Y Posts: 4,875	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 18, 2011 0:06:13 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by C H E Y E N N E on Jan 18, 2011 0:06:13 GMT -7 Aww, night D:

Laya Moderator The God of Mischief; My love; Loki. Posts: 3,073	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 18, 2011 14:26:22 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Laya on Jan 18, 2011 14:26:22 GMT -7 Aye.
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Rogue of Night Global Moderator Uchiha Sasuke ? Haruno Sakura Posts: 6,807	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 18, 2011 16:59:09 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rogue of Night on Jan 18, 2011 16:59:09 GMT -7 Hi~
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Natoya Global Moderator "That's tragic." Posts: 823	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 18, 2011 18:21:29 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Natoya on Jan 18, 2011 18:21:29 GMT -7 Awwww... tears up Imouto, that scene is soooo touching and sorrowful! Makes me want to cry...
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C H E Y E N N E Administrator E L E M E N T A R Y Posts: 4,875	Kirk to Enterprise! It's the Sixth Chatroom! Jan 18, 2011 18:42:43 GMT -7 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by C H E Y E N N E on Jan 18, 2011 18:42:43 GMT -7 It gets worse. If you want, onee-chan, I can show you the whole scene.

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